Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Hello, Help me. How's this draft conclusion? If not, you can fix or add it for me. Thanks. ?

He lacked of grief that showed his feelings: remorseless and silent and more. He did not feel sorrowful and say farewell to his mother who died. Another, he killed the Arab man, he might be ruthless. When he was third found the guilty of death, he wasn’t shocked. Finally, he was executed.

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